Saturday, 27 June 2009
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Reminisce
I miss the way things used to beWhen we were happy, so carefreeBut I look upon what we've becomeAnd take a look at everyoneWe are all together nowJust standing alone in the crowdCause everytime I reminisce.I think about what I have missedAnd I'm always gonna make mistakesAnd I'm always gonna slam the brakesBut I'm gonna keep moving onTo become what I have longedThe time I've spent, wasted with youthEverytime, avoiding the truthBut everything caught up at sixteenAnd my life was becoming one major sceneI was a rebel without a causeNever looking straight, but straight across
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Comments (11)
Did you write that? If so, then it's not bad at all...
"And my life was becoming one major scene
I was a rebel without a causeNever looking straight, but straight across"Love these lines...
Beautiful :] and I can relate.
Aren't those lines that speak to the inner mind...
"Never looking straight, but straight across"
I have to be careful not to plagiarize that...but it's so powerful!
And to think, don't sunsets make one reminisce...?
cool. reflective of many of today's youth. at least you have the courage to admit it. that's a good sign.
very nice poem =)
Lovely poem :) Many poems that rhyme often have lines here and there that sound forced, but yours doesn't at all.
love it!
Well written.
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